Warrior Princess

This was, purely and simply, a beautiful poem. The imagery is at once rich, sensual, delicate, and evocative. I could see, hear, and feel everything you described. This poem proves ...

Whoa, okay....I'm afraid I didn't understand a word of that, but it was kind of cool nevertheless. I don't know, maybe you meant it to be kind of abstract? Anyway ...

Okay....*deep breath* I didn't think it was scary so much as dark, disturbing, and slightly sadistic. It gave me a mental image I did not particularly want. Did I enjoy ...

LOVED IT!!! Suspenseful and very awesome. Post more as soon as you can!!!

Yes you should definitely put some romance in it, love always makes a story a tad more interesting. If you're going to make Melissa like me (very sweet of you! ...

Wow this is a good story you got going here. A little hard to understand at times but on the whole very cool and suspenseful. :D

Thx 4 reading my poem ppl. Wolf said it's too cliched. That may be so, but sometimes cliches truly are the best way of saying things. BTW, Wolf, I find ...

Hey, this poem is actually pretty good. And the rhymes don't sound contrived, either. Keep up the good work! P.S. Glad you liked my play! :)

I hope you guys (and girls!) like this poem. U C, this morning I was standing in my back yard looking down into my pool. The water was perfectly still, ...